|Reviews for Waning Moon|
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I love this! I especially like the two longer lines you've finished off the verses with. I haven't seen you use that form before, and you do it very well. And I love how the last line doesn't quite rhyme, but draws you into the poem a lot.
The only quibble I have is that the puncuation for the last line should be a question mark, not a full stop.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
wow, that left me: uh...*_*
this is super awesome! though i didn't get the slope's relation to earth.
the metaphors and similes here were very creative and added to the meaning. i dunno what to say. i'm speechless.