This one felt a lot different from your other pieces...still good though! ;)

And are you doing NaNoWriMo? If you are, make sure you add me as a buddy? (Username: Ravina!)

- Rebekah

Completely and totally LOVED this! And oh my god, NaNoWriMo already! I completely forgot!

Awesome story, loved it to pieces :D

-Aria

haha love it. great story!

Hahahaha, loved it so much, just brilliant. It was a good ending but there are maybe a few areas you could do with expanding if you feel it needs it.

JM

Awesome! I love it! And i dont think it needs anything else! :)

cute(:

This one was not very clear. It was confusing. Maybe you can add some more clarity? But otherwise it was a great read! Very nice! Expecting your next one! :D

aw. so cute!

i really like it the way it is

but from the background and information so far

it seems as if there was more prodding into the past and uncovering the mystery of what happened, that needed to be doing

i think it first came across as a more than one chapter story is all _

but i still loved it

the ending is very cute :D

i like the girl character alot

well done!

hahahahahaha

Yay! New update!

It was cute. A little confusing for me because I'm really tired, but still good.

I really think you should update again. Hopefully soon. An update for a certain story that you've been writing. I really think it'd be wise to do that.