Reviews for Across the Universe
enviousxbeauty chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Aww that's really sweet. Great job!
Noninone chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Aw! so cute and romantic!

YohKo B.
give me november chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I’ll be banished at morning

But I’ll be here waiting

For you across

The universe.

my favorite line! i really liked this. the only thing i'd change is the first line, where you used fall/fallen twice. other than that, this was a wonderful piece with a very original idea. besides, i love poems about the universe and constelations:)

yours, always

willow
Mirabella chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
This is lovely!