Good, just simply good!

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aww... so cute love it :P

I love ur story, u picked it up from every mangas i knw. You rule dude. Eventho, you rushed it.

"'Now you'll have to be mine forever.'

Had he really meant it?

His frustration built when he realized that his desire for Toma had only been a fleeting interest. Ryuu would have hurt the boy if they'd stayed together.

But now…?

Now, Ryuu had never wanted anything so badly, and he'd let it run out of his door."

This passage is the key piece to what makes the sequel work. Very realistic and true to your characters' motives and development.

AWESOME!

I would have loved it if he remained a nerd XD!

I'm all for the nerd uke and hot seme stories, so hard to find.

criesAAhh it's so beautiful!I luved it!I love all your stories,I am your official fan!I don't have an account,I tried making one multiple times but it kept being crappy DX muI'll manage though

Awe...haha i'm always gonna do that aren't i? You know the whole "happy ending" and "no tragidy" thing really gets to me, i'm gald that there's someone else who shares my views, cause i find sad stories really depressing...

Cute story :) I can't believe it has so few reviews.

Awesome story! X]

I loved this story it was good hope u make lots more

Ahh...I was so disappointed when I saw that so few people reviewed this story!

I absolutely loved it! It was sad and sweet at the same time. I loved the ending!

heh heh...i'm so happy their relationship's gonna finally last...i think.

anyways, great story! XD

well this time it lasted yay!

so sad T.T

I really like this story...i hope you continue to add to it or write a sequel or something...