|Reviews for The Scream|
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
A striking work of abstract poetry. Like abstract painting, the purpose is not to convey a harmonious whole, but to challenge the mind to study the individual pieces and fit them together in designs that fit each observer's conception of art and reality. You did well at drawing us into your act of creation.
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
This was creepy. As someone who loves the night, I liked this poem as well. You create a feeling of foreboding, but peace as well, leaving me nervous (but in a good way).
Again I have a suggestion for the last line. Instead of "her last unheard to her kin", maybe "her last unheard of kin". I get what you're trying to say with what you've said, and I think what you've written flows fine, but I just wanted to throw that idea at you. :)
| like-diamonds chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
well written. you did well in creating a very ominous atmosphere.