|Reviews for Girl and Boy|
| APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Aw! I love this story! Cute :D :D
| Flashography chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
hahah aw, this was adorable! it just happened so fast, it was like woah!
I think the tiniest bit of confusion that you could have is because you change the view points, and that kind of throws people off when you don't label it. that's the only thing i really have to say, the rest is great!
| azeeunlove chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
this story is really good, but what happened to Ray moving? Where was he moving to? Is he not going to move anymore? I think that you need closure on that moving thing more. :):)
| HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Argh! I love it but I hate it when the issue that caused the initial problem isn't resolved. What's was his excuse for not going to the concert with her? I'm sorry but it is a pet peeve of mine when you it just ends like that. Otherwise, great story :)
| QuirkyDebutante chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Thumbs UP !
| ithinkyourgay chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
aw cute story. it made my cry!
| ghurl00 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I thought at first that they won't end up together. Btw, awesome story!)
| Sapphyre Nymph chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
He he. This was so cute! I loved it...and the length was perfect too.
Great job! :P
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
All of your stories are so cute...
| x3life chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
aww this was so cute
i loved it )
| Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
It's sweet, :D All guys are dumb, apparently.. LOL.
| dwpea chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
the alternating perspectives worked wonderfully!
actually...your writing made the story come to life.
i loved it!
| monotone rainbows chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
This one is definitely better than the unedited one, good job! They both made me smile, but this one gave me butterflies :)
| Ilovetoloveanotherday chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
i like this ending better
but its still really quick