|Reviews for Archangel's Demon|
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Wow this story sounds so amazing. I really wish you were still working on it, I'd definitely follow it avidly. The writing is flawless so far, and the characters are fantastically done.
| SoneAnna chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I must say I really love how you've got this story going. D
Normally, I'm not one for religious-themed stories, but your intro of "no hot cocoa for you!" drew me in.
I laughed when GOD SPOKE IN ALL CAPS WITHOUT DIALOGUE PUNCTUATION, the comparison of temperatures in heaven and hell, etc. You did a really nice job with the humour in this. I laughed out loud many times. :)
One thing I was sort of confused on was...er, the plot. I didn't really understand what was going on. I mean...okay, he has to be dragged away from his food...to do what? Go to hell to do what, with a "demoness and a representative from Purgatory"? A job interview? In what context, exactly? To whom?
Overall, nice job. :)
| Moonshy chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
Wow, I'm really loving this! It's witty, humorous, and charming. I'm looking forward to and update. Keep up the good work!
| Liveey123348 chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
I LOVE IT! cant wait for the next chapter! 132/10
| Firegirl210 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Wow! This story sounds really interesting, and it's really well-written! I kind of enjoyed all the jokes. Gabe is hilarious, he kind of reminds me of the Phantom Thief Dark in DNAngel.
Anyway, keep it up and post another chapter soon!
| S. Kelly chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Amazing start! You write very well, with a keen wit and sense of humor. This line was especially amusing: "God kept his thermostat around fifty degrees Farenheit. Satan kept his thermostat at around eighty-five. They would have made a horrible married couple." I also loved the idea of people going through an application process to become an angel or devil.
Update soon! I'm excited to see what happens next.