What the heck? Oh no! Sarah has been taken away at the very end of the book? I'm definitely going to read the sequel.

Anywho, though, I really, really love your story. The characters are nicely rounded throughout the whole novel. I'm glad you are writing a sequel. :)

*Alasse Buchanan

some grammatical errors but nothing a brief reading can't fix.

i was wondering exactly how old the family is.

dunno if you were gonna mention it.

and if the black hole spewed out demons what about angels?

the 6 thing was clever :) very much so.

really really really good.

by now ive said all i wanted lol.

im just giving u more reviews so it'll get more popular. good luck!

so she always asumed they were demons but only after she was told did she think that they were evil. all the while before she tried to get sean's attention.

this is human nature. hahah i sound all philosophical. i really like and cant wait to read the history :)

something trying to invade her mind? haha im going crazy. they arent explaining themselves!

and brennen's back?

love love love

because she has hte book?

i love how she just straight out believed it. i mean even if she found all the evidence the mind naturally creates logical reason for why it wouldnt happen.

but hey she is one smart chick :)

i really really like this but i dont like how they're not admitting their feelings!

one thing that gets to me when i read stories...

teh part where they think their thoughts like im not distancing myself... am i?

like u know she's in denial and u know she knows its the opposite... i know that as an author you want the readers to know that but i feel like as a reader we've seen enough of thsi type to know (or guess) what she is going through?

i cant really say there's a better alternative than writing it and assume readers would get it but... its something to think about?

anyways i love love love!

aw. this is so good. so good.

ur characters are being more developed so that we can relate!

dang good good.

i wanna know more! i really like this :)

and trust me, this is better written than a lot of other ones on this site. ive read a ton.

but this one needs a bit more details and a better start to the story.

its good.

if it was me id be like yo tell me or break me.

either way it's his choice. cause according to human rules this is how it goes.

history doesnt concern me, politics doesnt concern me but we still hear it...

so she's some sort of bad charm for the demons?

and corren is part of hte family or just like a prophet? nice twist1

i wonder why u chose demons... for some reason angels just doesnt hold the same fascination for us as demons... interesting to think about. but demons being nice is something we like and something people think could be real?

hahaa im blabbing. nice work.

another car?

maybe she got one too!

now i wonder if shed accept it and feel omg who are these people?

i like