|Reviews for You're My Mistake|
| Archia chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
It doesn't rhyme, but it still flows nicely. I got from this that all the happy memories, weren't worth the pain at the end. That's my interpretation at least, and I liked the idea of it. I also enjoyed how this told a story, and had more than a meaning.
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
This is good, and you don't even rhyme. :)
The lay out threw me a little though. Maybe a few line spaces?
And "I've been living in the shadows, since we've been together" sounds like the character is still with this person, when they're obviously not.
The last four lines were really powerful, and really ring true. Well done... again!