Reviews for Seeking Light
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
aw, so cute! loved the last line, most touching~
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
The line "Seeking for the tomorrow" is excellent. It drew me into the poem. Really good.

I actually read the line "terrified to shed even a tear" with the "shed" and "even" the other way round. What do you think?

Apart from that, you've missed an apostrophe in the first line.