|Reviews for Seeking Light|
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
aw, so cute! loved the last line, most touching~
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
The line "Seeking for the tomorrow" is excellent. It drew me into the poem. Really good.
I actually read the line "terrified to shed even a tear" with the "shed" and "even" the other way round. What do you think?
Apart from that, you've missed an apostrophe in the first line.