Awww! Cute story!

I love it!

:))

I realized I might have been too harsh in my previous review and probably it's just me and that this kind of stories are just not my thing so yeah, that :P

This story would be a lot more interesting if at least anyone in it acted like an actual human being.
Kids like Anthony don't do drugs, a girl like Sadie would have immediately ratted them out on their smoking when she was the one unfairly put in that hole, she wouldn't have attacked Edward during the fight defending Asher. A pothead can't stand a chance, much less hold his own, in a fight against an athlete (who is unlikely would do drugs too, and one who showed such a reaction against cigarettes definitely wouldn't do drugs), etc.

PS: The whole conversation at the end of this chapter doesn't make any sense.

Meh I'm giving it one more chapter. Sad because at the beginning of the first chapter it looked like the concept had promise.

i feel like this story is based on the movie the Breakfast Club! i absolutly adored that movie! XD but im curious if you ment to make it like that or if you havnt seen that movie and made it up... but if you havnt seen it i recomend that you watch it lol :D but i have to say i love this story so far im not sure if i will stick with reading it as it goes on though... but anyway im babbling lol! :P i give this a thumps up so far! :P

****Amelia**** :)

Judd is awesome, going out and making his own path like that. This is a fantastic story. I love the ending.

Tony is dangerous. He gives me the creeps. Sadie should get a restraining order.

That's such a sweet moment. I love this story.

Natasha is the bestest fictional best friend ever.

Also, I love the dialogue in your story. Very realistic.

So, what happens, they go to prom and live happily-ever-after together? And what about Edward? What about Judd's dad and about Tony? Do they all just dissipate in to nothing? I sure hope so...

Anyways, beside to sort-of-cliff-hanger-but-not-really ending it was an amazing story and i look forward to see what you novel Stranger is about!

Great job of showing not telling with their actions. Abby

Just a few little nitpicks. It is really good.

"Did you think I was going (to) hit you?"

At that point in his speech, Sadie (omit and) leaned forward slightly so her lips brushed against his collarbone.

I like the way you are already giving them a little chemistry.

This is one of the best written stories I have read here. Good use of dialogue. I like the way you gave everyone an activity at the end.