Reviews for Trainwreck |
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![]() ![]() ![]() judd is annoying, why throw the ball? ' what a dick, and i dont like how his hair is halfed in the middle lol but the story is interesting, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() judd really need some anger management |
![]() ![]() ![]() Judd is a jackass but a sexy jackass :) I'm really curious though to find out more about Sadie and her relationship with Tony. _ -Liz :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsk, Tsk Judd...Maybe you shouldn't have been fighting and she wouldnt have had to break it up P Good luck D It seems like the story is going by so fast, but at the same time, it's only 9 hours ;) so it makes sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hate girls like that...annoying and idiotic. LOL the drama's already starting and it's only been like 20 minutes? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O Asher's a hot name ;) Good start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() almost all your female character are described as the same... are they you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh fight! haha update soon please! have fun at ur date! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you see alot of movies. That's cool, so do I :D So, is sadie the basketcase? |
![]() ![]() ![]() tony seems like a jerk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tony? Ex-boyfriend that is Asher's rival? A friend who betrayed him? It seems Asher really doesn't like the guy...Or maybe i am wrong...IDK |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, what an interesting start! Thank you! Can't wait to read more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great tension. great chapter. hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() A modern version of the breakfast club... I'm intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Reminds me quite a bit of The Breakfast Club but with an extra girl. There were some areas in your setting and character descriptions that seemed a little awkward or forced but other than that this looks really good. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |