Reviews for Voice of an Angel
steffxnie chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
A simple, yet meaningful poem.
3M2R chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
The last four lines that the angel speaks can really knock some sense into those who wallow in self-pity.

I think this is a good poem though it doesn't have rhyme, it flows well.

A good part,

"Doubt tainted my decisions,

I could not act.

Responsibility weighted my shoulders,

I could not stand."

I like that "I could not" is repeated.

Fav lines:

"Innocence was my protector,

And innocence was my demise."

"A prisoner of my own mind."

Good write, very creative. I like!

Ger.