|Reviews for Voice of an Angel|
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
A simple, yet meaningful poem.
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
The last four lines that the angel speaks can really knock some sense into those who wallow in self-pity.
I think this is a good poem though it doesn't have rhyme, it flows well.
A good part,
"Doubt tainted my decisions,
I could not act.
Responsibility weighted my shoulders,
I could not stand."
I like that "I could not" is repeated.
"Innocence was my protector,
And innocence was my demise."
"A prisoner of my own mind."
Good write, very creative. I like!