|Reviews for Rust After Waking|
| Pan'sChild chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Very interesting... I really like this story idea.
You're writing is very nice, it gives good concise descriptions and the tone is very consistent. There are a few places where there are typos and grammar mistakes but those are easily fixed. My only real crit is that you had slowed this scene down and really savored the decay of not only the city around them, but of societal calm. But that's about it.
keep on writing. :-)
| m00nl1ghtshad0w chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Wow, awesome story! What a great idea-to have everything rust away. Keep up the good work.