Oh, this is such a sweet little thing, but somehow it feels more like an essay than a story. I think this would work well if you are able to expand it, give it a storyline and characters.

Or, even if you don't have characters, just have "I" and "you", it work work wonderfully because you already have such a sweet storyplot in your head.

Narq.

just because he was nice to you didn’t mean he had fallen as hard as you had - OUCH!

So very true! I was starting to think I was the only girl out there who though about such things.

Aww this is terribly true.

But the thing with Romeo, he went after many beauty's. He thought with his second head, caring not of what the girl felt like. How do you think he feel in love with Juliet?

•"Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight!/ For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night."

What does that tell you?

He thinks he loves because the beauty of Juliet is so intense.

Crazy, I know.

I love this story, it's so poetic! (Especially the last paragraph.)

This is such an intense story. It is so very true also. Although you might think you've found the right guy, there's someone out there who truely belongs to you. I loved every minute, I hope one day this story will come true for me and I'll find my prince, LOL :)) Keep writing! This was amazing!

I thought this was brilliantly put together. There was just enough description to keep me entertained throughout the length of the chapter. i'm glad the individual, in the end, did not lose hope on love. Excellent job Leigh :) I thought this work was really cute.

Keep writing

P.S- If you have time, I would love for you to review the Second Chapter of my story entitled Heart to Heart. I would love to hear from you.

-Agent