Reviews for A Little Light
lymli chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
oh my... I really, I'm not gonna say that but I cried 'cause of this! I know what it means, sometimes when you "lose" a friend, you just lose it, no matter the phones and the computers and always it's hard to say how you feel, right? the thing I like the most it's how the character started describing her, it's like they were together in the thoughts and she actually never was forgotten.

lovely and tearful play. as usual you're good.

happy christmas and happy holidays, new year, happy ya!
drama-queen-r chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Hi!

This is my frist review on this site, so hopefully I can be of some help.

I really liked it, it was very sweet. There were a couple of things I noticed:

'That... alone'

I didn't really underwtood this little bit. I seemed a bit unnessacery.

'Our friend left-'

I think it should be 'Our friend's left'

Apart from those two little things, it was perfect.

Hope I've been of some help,

drama-queen.