Reviews for Anyone But Her
awriterscorned chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I sympathize but this isn't really a poem. It's basically a couple of sentences broken up into words. More feeling, more showing and less telling would really strengthen this.

And yes, they tend to pick the worst people possible just to mess with our lives. It's true.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
"C*nt-licking little whore." Oh my. That's a pretty alliterative little swear word. ;)