Reviews for I Fell In Love With the Rain
writingpistachio chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Loved it. The feeling you get from Nose, Hands, Feet, Face, Head is so steady, like... THE DRIP OF RAIN. 0.o I liked it. The stains, the hurt, the pains... leaving naught but hope. I loved that part. It's so true. I feel exactly the same way about rain. I dance and twirl and kiss the rain. And I fall down a lot.

I think the ending COULD be more subtle. But as it is, it was wonderful! Really, really nice. ]
L-Lilith chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
(I don't know if this belongs in the category of "religion" but w/e) I think the first half of this poem is stronger than the second half. It starts to go downhill with "and within," I think. Also "leaving naught but hope" sounds really unnatural. Maybe add a metaphor or simile somewhere to spice things up. Also, the ending could be a little more subtle. Overall, nice effort!