Reviews for Shadow |
---|
BubbaGumpShrimp chapter 4 . 10/24/2009 Loved it :] Well written and interesting characters! Although I have to admit that Catherin is the most unconvincing 10-year-old. Also, I'm confused by some inconsistencies of your other characters. Like Robert's cruel eyes turning to concern and Tylin overlooking some of Catherin's comments at first but is apparently now spying on her. In any case, it was very enjoyable. Please update soon! |
Ijo chapter 4 . 10/23/2009 This is interesting. I was laughing from some of the dialogue. I really like it and hope you will update soon. |