Reviews for john's tranformation
Chesterfield chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Hey, I'm pretty sure there will be more chapters, right? I think it would benefit from further "transformation." I think you would also benefit from spell checking and attention to little grammar things, especially in your summary... it can be a bit of a turn off to most readers if things aren't spelled right in the summary.

The only thing I'm a little confused with is John's motivation to have a dog, which is why I think more chapters would be great. Keep writing!