Reviews for Bring Me to Life
K chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
(watashi ga) hoshi e ochiru

shiroi omoide de tajitaji

mune no kage ga

(Don't know what's best to use)

mori no naka ni ojika

yami no naka ni okami

(watashi no/waga) hitomi ni kagayaku hikari

doushite kimi ga watashi ni negau?

ikura

ikura made ochiru?

kimi ga watashi ni yakusoku shita (you could also use chikaita which is more like pledge/vow)

(watashi no) tatta hitotsu no negai

Nice job. Keep practicing.