Reviews for Innocence
3M2R chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
This is beautiful. They rhyme smoothen the flow of the poem (:

I haven't seen many Singaporeans... Actually, you're the second I've met (other than myself) writes poetry. there are more local novelists around.

I really can't find a line better than the other. Perfectly pieced together, not too long-winded. Good write!
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Wonderful piece. It has such beautiful expressions. I really like this!

x
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
This was beautiful, the emotion and the imagery, and the flow.

Again I really noticed the "-ing" words were a bit much.

Keep writing. :D
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Very powerful imagery. I like that.

the "Inspired by..." thing? I know exactly where this poem's coming from. Very good piece.

PS Thanks for the review you left me! :)
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
the first verse's theme was a flower, a cliche and overused metaphor but the way you've written it and desribed it was awesome.

your a/n explained a lot, if it wasn't included, it would've been vague(in a good way) and i liked it being loosely related, so that any person could relate to it

i can't say i know exactly about it, but i thought i had a best friend but we stopped like four or five years ago but we're still on good terms. and it feels awkward. maybe she never was my best friend really.