...i kinda feel like allie is like a super awkward fifteen-year-old. she's a sophomore in college and she hasn't done ANYTHING? just saying.

still, loved alex's total bluntness and the classic cameronXerin interaction. nice job!

EEK EEK EEK I LOVED IT JUST LOVED IT

Really cute story! :)

oh, this is so cute! I love it! :p

I like this story. It was sweet and the ending made me smile. Great Job!

Cute! :)

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adorable!

haha, i love Alex.

if only the guys i know were that straightforward.

Adorable, cliche, but those are always my favorite. This is well written. My only qualms would be not quite getting to know the characters some and them sort of floating in space. It's very dialogue based so sometimes I forget where they are/what's going on. Kind of movie like, but I can't picture the background. Maybe I am just picky like that. Cute idea though and love the ending.

Well if it makes you feel any better, I thought it was cute! ]

And this might sound creepy, but I visited your profile to see what kind of person you are, and we are really alike - it's almost scary. Like most of your books are my favorite and the movies too. Plus I'm assuming you go to Princeton and that's totally like my dream school. I loved it when I visited it.

But anyways, I'm sorry some creepy guy hit on you in NYC, but I couldn't help laughing about it. I probably wouldn't if it happened to me though.

Ha, I laughed when Alex said, "I really want to kiss you right now." (Something my own first kiss said before we kissed. Well, technically it was more along the lines of, "I want to kiss you right now, I think I'm just going to do it already in front of everyone." Then I talked him out of it. Well...okay forget it.)

Anyway, awesome start to a story! Keep it coming!

Aww, that was so sweet! I wish it wasn't a one-shot. :/ Oh well,

it will just have to go to my favourites instead of alerts... :)

Oh, and the perfume guy? I'd be so freaked out if that

happened to me in real-life, I'd probably just blush and run

away. xD

that's so sweet! great story, i loved it! :)

hahah i love it already :]

i just hope you update soon cause i just cant wait for the next chapter! i hope you dont become one of those authors who dont update their amazing story for a long time! D;