Reviews for The Candle
La Chatte de la Musique chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Hey there!

Just wanted to say I loved the poem! "The Sick Rose" is one of my favorites and you did an excellent job! :) When I read it, I could see everything and I loved that. It just proves that even the smallest things can have the biggest thoughts. _
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I like this. Though provocing. The rhyming was done well and gave it a nice flow.

Great work(:
Kobra Kid chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I really liked this poem. :). It made me feel calm and relaxed, and I could just imagine the star flickering in the painted sky. :). Keep this up!

B. Cross from the RH

-Payback via Rise From The Ashes, plesse?
seredemia chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I like this You're very talented on writing poems, you know? I'm rubbish at them... P

I get this poem. So, she's scared of the candle becayse some people use them to find their way when they're about to kill someone..? That's true... I like how you made even a simple item such as a candle dangerous. That's a very good idea, that. Good poem!
AvidWriter-92 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Hey, this is Avid from the Roadhouse. :)

I enjoyed this poem a lot! My favorite stanzas were probably the second and third ones because they had a nice twist to them. I thought these stanzas were cleverly written. :)

It was just overall, a great poem, both structually and poetically. :)

The only thing that I don't think makes much sense is the wording "And yet, still I fear you." I didn't think that the previous stanzas indicated a reason for the person to fear the candle's light, necessarily.

Hope that made sense... xD

Lovely poem!

AvidWriter-92
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Very nice work! Blake is one of my favorite poets, and you did an excellent job drawing inspiration from "The Sick Rose". Well done! I love your poetry :D
The Tragedian chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
What can I say! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I WANT YOUR POETIC SKILL! Your poems are better than mine! You MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST publish these poems and send me an autographed copy!

Love,

F.H

PS. I'm serious about the publishing! :D