Reviews for When Baking a Cake
romanticrazzy chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I like the phrase "raw red" a lot. At the beginning I thought I would be bored but it got a lot better. Good job.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
"Outside must be azure." I like that the title could lead right into this line - that's so cool.

"Rapturously." Lovely word choice.

"You must think you know yourself completely." I like that the word 'think' suggests that the speaker will never truly know herself at all.

"The skin on your arms will slide off with the water." Vivid, chilling imagery.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Your imagery is clever, as always. Really captivating.
Bethy chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Interesting... I have to say it's hard for me to keep up with your newer work, you seem to be all over the place.