|Reviews for When Baking a Cake|
| romanticrazzy chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I like the phrase "raw red" a lot. At the beginning I thought I would be bored but it got a lot better. Good job.
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
"Outside must be azure." I like that the title could lead right into this line - that's so cool.
"Rapturously." Lovely word choice.
"You must think you know yourself completely." I like that the word 'think' suggests that the speaker will never truly know herself at all.
"The skin on your arms will slide off with the water." Vivid, chilling imagery.
| Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Your imagery is clever, as always. Really captivating.
| Bethy chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Interesting... I have to say it's hard for me to keep up with your newer work, you seem to be all over the place.