Reviews for Find My Way Back to Wonderland
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I so relate to this. Not only do I love Alice in Wonderland (and I, too, cannot wait for the movie) I often want to get out of reality. Don't we all?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
"Freezing the time"... the word the there seemed odd

I like the phrasing here. It's very storybook like, which works well since it's about Wonderland. I also like the Wonderland references because I agree with you a/n. Nice use of parenthesis and other punctuation as well.

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LittlePieceLove chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Haha, this was cruel;

And so true.!

It seems like we can never escape reality,

And don't we all wish we were able to, like Alice?

I love it. :))
Rei Aisaka chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I love Alice in Wonderland too! LEWIS CARROLL IS AWESOME.

Anyway... Your poem reflects the way I feel about life now, in a way. Life's harsh and good things usually aren't made to last. Most of the time, when we want to relive those beautiful memories, it's already impossible.

I especially like the fourth stanza and the poem flows rather well too. Good job!