Reviews for When He Dumps You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw this was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! GREATEST ONE SHOT EVER! Don't know what it is about two people doing something together, something happening, and when it all gets better, they realize their feelings, but I loove stories like this. Enough with the late night ramble, would love more on these characters, or stories like this :D Fictionpress should have a 'stories like this' button or something.. hmm... Great story! Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so lovely and cute. I definitely enjoyed reading this story. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really, really cute. I love Oliver, and his name! Ollie. It's so cute. Haha. This was cliche, but I liked it a lot. Danny and Gary are terrible. Poor Clarisse! Anyway, your writing is awesome, and this was wonderful. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First, this story should get WAY more recognition, it's really really good! I like the characters, the story line, and descriptions.. It's all perfect. Really well done! ~HPRK |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey... just two things, I think it's antiseptic, not antibiotic. And at the end she piles and then 2 secs later they kiss? But anyways. Good story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this. It was very well written, and I liked that it was long enough to actually understand the characters and the story line. It was great! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. :). That was real sweet. Thanks for the fuzzy warmth, haha. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw. very cute and simple! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, but I think it's a little weird that Oliver is kissing her after she just had to puke... :-) But maybe that's a sign of real love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this! Bah, so sweet.. It made me smile! Though I wish it was longer.. They got to know each other only for a day.. LOL. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kissing after she puked? O.o Haha, other than that i LOVED this :P xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really adorable!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great oneshot... :P |