|Reviews for When He Dumps You|
| dreeming chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Aw this was cute!
| JustWords chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
OMG! GREATEST ONE SHOT EVER! Don't know what it is about two people doing something together, something happening, and when it all gets better, they realize their feelings, but I loove stories like this.
Enough with the late night ramble, would love more on these characters, or stories like this :D Fictionpress should have a 'stories like this' button or something.. hmm...
Great story! Cheers!
| reindrops chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is so lovely and cute. I definitely enjoyed reading this story. :3
| Kyllex chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Really, really cute. I love Oliver, and his name! Ollie. It's so cute. Haha.
This was cliche, but I liked it a lot. Danny and Gary are terrible. Poor Clarisse!
Anyway, your writing is awesome, and this was wonderful. Good job!
| HPRK08 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
First, this story should get WAY more recognition, it's really really good!
I like the characters, the story line, and descriptions.. It's all perfect. Really well done!
| tea.bags chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Hey... just two things, I think it's antiseptic, not antibiotic. And at the end she piles and then 2 secs later they kiss? But anyways. Good story :)
| Ardendale chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I absolutely loved this. It was very well written, and I liked that it was long enough to actually understand the characters and the story line. It was great! :)
| windyday chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Aww. :). That was real sweet. Thanks for the fuzzy warmth, haha.
| huimei chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
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| kwil feather 730 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
aw. very cute and simple!
| blubbfreak chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Cute story, but I think it's a little weird that Oliver is kissing her after she just had to puke... :-) But maybe that's a sign of real love.
| Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I like this! Bah, so sweet.. It made me smile! Though I wish it was longer.. They got to know each other only for a day.. LOL. :D
| x Farii chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Kissing after she puked? O.o
Haha, other than that i LOVED this :P xD
| ghurl00 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
That was really adorable!:D
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Great oneshot... :P