Reviews for In The End, No Smile Will Help
writingpistachio chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
DUDE! I LOVE IT! IT'S AWESOME, and the suspense is amazingly done! You could've stretched the suspense out more, but... wow. Just amazing. I love how the suspense was carefully let out of the balloon, until finally, "In the end," the last sentence came and killed half a million.

Amazing. ]

~writingpistachio