Reviews for xylophone ribcage
socks-lost chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Another great one! I really like the second stanza and how you described everything. It's raw too, and I like how you can get so much meaning out of so few words. Great job!
bbyxbanaaana chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
bulimia nervosa.

a sickly disease indeed.

been there, done that.
Raven-Illeen Saint Claire chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
i love it! i also find it quite strange that its very much like a poem i wrote! great minds think alike, right! haha. have a wonderful day!
EBSmith chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
nice, lovely language, very 'straight to the point' but carefully worded, and rather humourous too.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I really loved this. Its such a controversial subject, but you've written it beautifully. It has a rawness to it, but the wording is very graceful at the same time. The imagery is strong, and this is just an all around favorite of mine. Great work
colorful chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
whoa incredible.

wow. awesome awesome job.