|Reviews for xylophone ribcage|
| socks-lost chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Another great one! I really like the second stanza and how you described everything. It's raw too, and I like how you can get so much meaning out of so few words. Great job!
| bbyxbanaaana chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
a sickly disease indeed.
been there, done that.
| Raven-Illeen Saint Claire chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
i love it! i also find it quite strange that its very much like a poem i wrote! great minds think alike, right! haha. have a wonderful day!
| EBSmith chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
nice, lovely language, very 'straight to the point' but carefully worded, and rather humourous too.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I really loved this. Its such a controversial subject, but you've written it beautifully. It has a rawness to it, but the wording is very graceful at the same time. The imagery is strong, and this is just an all around favorite of mine. Great work
| colorful chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
wow. awesome awesome job.