Reviews for Monsieur Micah
Ravina chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
You guys call it 'yoghurt' down south? (There's no 'h' in the American version.)

I'm confused about the au pair bit because of the being-like-a-sister thing. Actually wait, I'm not. (I'm writing this out as I'm thinking it...and I just went on Google and looked up 'au pair'. I always thought of it a maid or nanny or something but I never considered them a part of the family. Bleh.)

I like the Micah's name. It sounds so...Jewish. (Okay...just checked on Google and it IS Jewish.)

Maybe I should stop writing thought-dump reviews since you probably don't care what my crappy thought-process is.

Anyway...I thought it could have been drawn out some at the end when they get together. It was a tad fast just at that part.

Otherwise, it was great!

- Rebekah
AnswerKey chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
So she's French right?

I really like the name Micah. I don't know why, maybe cuz it's different. (:

It seems like he jumped from hating her to liking her too fast. And just because she petted his hair? Or maybe it's just because we're seeing through her eyes. Maybe he liked her all this time. Oh well.

Great one-shot again! I don't know how you come up with these things. You're amazing!
sherbetsi chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Omg you're in the writeaway. I just read this there and then checked my inbox and was all why didnt i know this before. Im voting for you by the way. i was even before i knew this was you so.. well done. XD

Sian x
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Hmm to be honest, I thought Micah was just displaying lust the whole time. Like they didn't really have a relationship of the talking variety so it was kinda moving fast. But that's just my opinion. /
je ne veux pas travailler chapter 1 . 10/26/2009

you're hilariosu

i hate redheads _

your typical female character remidns me on georgia nichols..from angus thongs and full frontal snogging..heard of it ;D?
Ryane Silvernow chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Very...interesting. I liked the one-shot, even though it confused me to a little extent, but I get it now. I can't really think of anything else to say...but I gotta go re-read Bam so far...Waiting for the update!

Cupid's Jinx chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Do you know what I absolutely adore about your work?

The fact that every main character is different.

I can't do that -laughs-

Which is why I love your work so much - every piece is new and refreshing, and I love it!


This piece gets 10 gold stars, as always XD


N.M.E chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Aw...SO cute! Love French guys! And stories about them. I loved our female protagonist. Very cute to read as usual! This seemed shorter to me than the rest of your one-shots. Short and sweet! Loved it! Keep putting up new ones!
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
i loved this oneshot. i wished it was a bit longer though.
Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
And another story! I'm so proud of you I should do the same, lol. It's just that I have an exam week at the moment ( Been dying to write again. Just no time... sigh...

Loved the story!
MK16 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009


*shakes head*

easily distracted

and i enjoyed this story

i liked how you mixed her thoughts and her actions _ the yogurt bit was awesome

well done !
letitshine chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
You write like Meg Cabot... in Queen of Babble.
emerald chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Lol, good job. Ahh, the passion...
Aaerie chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
she might be in heaven but rite now im joining her thats how good this story is
slee5133 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
hey! i really like this story but i'm a tad confused. she's the au pair so is she french or english where is the host family? haha i know i'm over analysing but its bugging me. :D
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