Reviews for WordLess
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Love this so relateable
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I wasn't really fond of the narrator's tone throughout, though it was obvious she spoke with emotion.
thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Thanks for your review of "PS I'd Rather Be Sleeping".

This would be a lot better if you varied up your punctuation - instead of just using commas and periods, try using dashes and semicolons and colons. Also, your material is a we little bit worn out. Cliche, if you will. Other than that, it's really good.

Keep up the good work, and thanks again for the review. I really appreciate it.

-thewhimsicalbard
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
"Everytime I meet him,"... every time

Cause should be 'Cause

I like the piece. I think the beginning part about being a dictionary was really a great comparison. The piece itself is sweet. Nice job.
nickyO chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Ouch. There's always hope. The poem, however, does say what you need it to say. Good job.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
"I wish I could say it." It's hard trying to find the right words to describe emotions that are, by their nature, rather indescribable.
MoonlightRouge chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
sometimes I wish that too then everything wouldn't so hard and complicated,i like your poem i like how you put your heart to it

everything you feel, it's amazing I think you have a chance with this guy just take things slow one at a time, show him the real you inside and out, good luck