|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn|
| Planurescape chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
I love this story of yours! I cant wait to see whats in store for both Helena and Vinny, especially now that Helena knows Vin's secret. Looking forward to the next chapter and please update soon
| curlyxcutie chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
Oh, please, please hurry up and write the story! You wouldn't believe how absolutely in love with it I am! You're characters are all so real, the story's one of the best I've ever read, includng real books! I seriously think you should get it published...please? It's an amazing series, incredibly fascinating. Vinny is my favorite character! Actually, when I'm reading it, I feel like I'm actually IN the story. Please hurry up and get the chapters posted, because I only have two months left of summer and I can't stay up all night reading the Kiss of Twilight series like I've been doing for the past few days. Oh; -and this is a request, you don't have to follow through with it- but maybe you could have Helena save Vinny from something in this book? I mean, he's always saving her, and I think she should return the favor. But anyways, as I said, I really,really, LOVE LOVE LOVE these books,and I'm really looking forward to reading OR So the Story Goes once you get it published!
| Red Warden chapter 2 . 6/23/2010
I Think I might like it better if Vinny doesn’t come along. Then again I would miss all the sexual tension. This chapter seems a lot less confusing then the original one; I guess that’s why you changed it? And did you change the prologue?
I wish Eve didn’t have to die.
| Hydrogen Peroxide chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter. I really can't! Its been so long...So I hope that perhaps you could update soon?
| LesWinVS.ShelCoop chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
Hooray! An update! However it has been over a month, so please please please update quickly. I love this trilogy.
| LadyoflaSelva chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
WOOHO! Update. Please update ASAP!
| MorningManiacEveningElegance chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
Although Vinny's secret may have been slightly anti-climatic, I still LOVED you update. Aw poor Chris. He just wants his big sister to stay, but he can't seem to get through to her...UPDATE! ASAP! (Wow, I seem bipolar today.)
| Arainrhod chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
Finally finished the third book, was saving my review for the end... loved them
hope you start writing soon
| dwpea chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
of course i remember you!
IT"S BEEN SO SO SO SO SO LONG!
but i'm SO SO SO glad you updated!
you're writing style is still so damn interesting and wonderful!
I loved this chapter. the way you weaved in the plot, the character's emotions etc.
i hope the next chapter will be updated soon...p
congrats on both entering optometry school and on getting a boyfriend! x3
| MeanGreenRene chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
AH FINALLY! I've waited so long! Thank you for updating and please update again ASAP!
| Treehugger22 chapter 2 . 5/6/2010
I say screw the people who don't like the Q & As. If they don't like them they can skip them. I like them because people think to ask questions that I don't, and it helps it all make sense. Anyway wow! Long time no update! I had to go back and read parts of the previous books to remind myself what this one was about! I'm glad you updated though because I love this story! Anyway update again soon! So exciting!
| a fan of your stories chapter 2 . 5/6/2010
*wuhu* you are back!
nice chapter! I hope you will update soon the next one!
| SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
| Venomous Vengeance chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
Oh! perfect ending! oh my god it's just that good! :)
although it does keep me wanting more, i totally have to applaud the great ending (again)! anyways, i can't wait for the next chapter!
| MuseofMagic chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
I read this the minute you posted it, but sadly I didn't have time to review until now. So... wow. Just... wow. So Helena finally knows... she's a little rash though with all her 'we're leaving now!' I mean, I get it, but... I'm just saying.
And Vinny! Finally admitted it... kind of... without so many words... -sighs-
I can't wait for you to update again! Keep up the awesome work.