AWSOME! CANT WAIT FOR MORE! PLEASE DONT LET RYAN DATE THAT VANESSA CHICK! HE CAN JUST KEEP TO HIMSELF AND THINK ABOUT WHATS HE DONE INSTEAD OF DATING OTHER STUPID CHICKS! THEY NEED TO BE EACH OTHERS FIRST :D! AND YEAH U JUST HATE STORIES WHEN THE GUYS DO THAT IT MAKES ME STOP READING THESE KINDS OF STORIES! SO IM BEGGING YOU DONT LET HIM! OH LOVE THE STORY!

i would like to read ryan's pov..

seems like a good story n i cant wait to read more..

please update more..i like the story!

hey!

its really really gud..cant wait to read the rest:D

cud u pls try and make the chapters longer nxt time? only because i want to read more of ur awesome writing!...and incase u havent realised im a new memeber to fiction press so it was gud to review ur wrk as a memeber and not as an not an anonymous! lol

this story looks really good! You should def. continue to write and post it! Please post another chapter. Its good!

Sounds like a good starting to this story. I like how it sounds. I was thinking somwthing like he realises what he's done and the hurt he's caused and all that. Sounds like it would make a really nice romance story. I'm curious to see what the next chapters will be like...

Great start to the story. Interesting way of itroducing the characters. Well it'd be nice to have them together at the end, a series of events occuring in between i guess...but i'm sure you would've thought of that already. Well i guess you could always start by making it mre clear where she is in the school hierarchy. Maybe she could change too over time...become more of a loner maybe?