When I first started reading this, I thought, "Hmm. . . This doesn't seem as good as the rest of her writing. . ." But then I continued to read and I now think that this is a very good poem. :D

I think the flow was really good, and I enjoyed the metaphores, especially "I have brought it closer to death/I'm a murderer". I really have an image, a scene, in my head as I read this poem.

Great Job,

My Parakeet Has Issues

Simple but great! Well done :) I like the tone in this piece. Keep it up!

~Anna~ _

;_; Reminds me of when I accidentally crushed a robin's egg. D; Only there wasn't another egg to make me feel better! Very good poem-thing.

I liked the descriptive language. Nice!

Cool. Not much of a poem guy, so I can't say much more.

Wow very poetic I love it )