|Reviews for Invisible Astronomy|
| Merovingian chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
As for rhetoric, talking about "word escaping mouths in a pulpy mess", and the way that you aspired to capture the reality of that paragraph. Well, I thought it was one of the most insightful things I have come across. Not saying it was perfect, but it sure was something.
Truly...spectacular. It was a spectacle. It was a sight to behold, though only for me. It did not escape my mind, but it strikes the right chords within me. Wonderful story. I am not in the right frame of mind to be applauding this piece, which is why I have resorted to a psuedo-cliche word like "wonderful". However, I must get it out now.
Whatever part of you this came from, I know that it will be complete one day.