Reviews for Succubus |
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![]() ![]() The fuck is wrong with you |
![]() ![]() The way you write this makes me envy Matt. I also think his ramblings are a unique way to show emphasis of his thoughts. Not a bad way to finish the fic, I would love to see more. |
![]() ![]() Just beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Please,for the love of jesus mclafferty fuckstein,keep this story going |
![]() ![]() Jesus Christ I cringed so hard when she started to bit down I also winced |
![]() ![]() Woooow. Just wow. This is amazing! I think it is really good. Like it seems like it Could happen(as realistically as possible) it makes sense and I was actually engulfed in the story. I like that the sex in it is good but not the kind like your trying to cover up the poor story telling like a lot of other stories. This is amazing and I would love to read more of this. |
![]() ![]() I usually don't read stories this short but I'm glad I did. Would love if you continued adding more to this story. You have a skill in writing I rarely see on here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish that I could read more... Is there more from where this came from? T_T |
![]() ![]() great... just great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cool story! Nice erotic and taboo imagery, and nicely worded. Love the plot...kinda envy "Mattie". I'd really love to see what kinds of twists and turns this peculiar relationship can take. ;) |
![]() ![]() Love it. It had a little of everything |
![]() ![]() Really ? If I met this guy. Drugging college girl and probably raping her is worth castration. If Girl get raped is normal and not really worth. Its like Guy getting their dick cut not worth and normal. Raping kill the girl inside. So I think cutting his dick is worth it. |
![]() ![]() Gay... |
![]() ![]() Great story. Loved it can't wait for the next addition |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so hoping for a 5th chapter |