Reviews for Succubus
LongLoreLover chapter 4 . 5/1/2015
...I hope you have a relationship as fulfilling as this, because you deserve one after writing that masterpiece
LongLoreLover chapter 3 . 5/1/2015
Oooooo, Mattie has a girlfriend XD
LongLoreLover chapter 2 . 5/1/2015
LMAO . "Just become my slave." That is too awesome. My eyebrows shot off my forehead. Wow. Onwards :)
LongLoreLover chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
This is intense...Onwards to the next chapter! XD
Benkei Urahara chapter 4 . 12/12/2014
Yes, yes, and more YES! Is there gonna be more? Because I really hope so.
anonymous chapter 4 . 6/26/2014
Wish I had that kind of life
:( (jealous)
jet chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
why did you stop? this is something new.
virusdozen chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
Certainly intriguing.
Rezkirel chapter 4 . 12/13/2012
The humor, I am going to say, FLOORED ME! XD
Are you possibly a college writing Proffesor? Because that is the only way I can explain your skill. The detail, humor, backstory even, makes me think "WHY ISN'T THIS PUBLISHED?!" Honestly, please, PLEASE, continue to write (type?), because you have too much skill to let it go to waste. Well, this is a good introduction to fictionpress that I've had thanks to you. If you can, I hope to see more of these two. If not, I understand. You left it at an amazing ending. Best wishes from Hell, Rezkirel.
P.S.: Light Yagami reference, I just sat there dumbstruck due to how amazing it was.
DarkDaisy chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
I'm lovin' dis story! It's turning out so cute! Plz update asap cuz' I can't to see what happens next! Will she meet his parents? Him hers? I'm guessing they'll fall in love if he gave her his first orgasm! I hope they do anyway...;)
Vampireacademyrox chapter 4 . 11/22/2010
love it plz ud soon :D
WildestHeart4ever chapter 4 . 11/20/2010
Haha! :D that is such a funny story, the guy has rather funny thoughts too :D

Great story :)
veralidaine sarrasri chapter 4 . 6/25/2010
aww, sweet. I'm liking this! I really hope you continue.
Titan2xmail.net chapter 4 . 3/7/2010
Great romantic story! I think you did well to add a bit of innocence to both characters - it makes the story a bit more real. I hope you'll continue this story in the near future. It has great potential.

Titan2
S.R. Moon chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
I love the story so far. It's very well written and intriguing. I hope you update soon!
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