Reviews for Succubus |
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![]() ![]() ...I hope you have a relationship as fulfilling as this, because you deserve one after writing that masterpiece |
![]() ![]() Oooooo, Mattie has a girlfriend XD |
![]() ![]() LMAO . "Just become my slave." That is too awesome. My eyebrows shot off my forehead. Wow. Onwards :) |
![]() ![]() This is intense...Onwards to the next chapter! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, yes, and more YES! Is there gonna be more? Because I really hope so. |
![]() ![]() Wish I had that kind of life :( (jealous) |
![]() ![]() why did you stop? this is something new. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Certainly intriguing. |
![]() ![]() The humor, I am going to say, FLOORED ME! XD Are you possibly a college writing Proffesor? Because that is the only way I can explain your skill. The detail, humor, backstory even, makes me think "WHY ISN'T THIS PUBLISHED?!" Honestly, please, PLEASE, continue to write (type?), because you have too much skill to let it go to waste. Well, this is a good introduction to fictionpress that I've had thanks to you. If you can, I hope to see more of these two. If not, I understand. You left it at an amazing ending. Best wishes from Hell, Rezkirel. P.S.: Light Yagami reference, I just sat there dumbstruck due to how amazing it was. |
![]() ![]() I'm lovin' dis story! It's turning out so cute! Plz update asap cuz' I can't to see what happens next! Will she meet his parents? Him hers? I'm guessing they'll fall in love if he gave her his first orgasm! I hope they do anyway...;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it plz ud soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! :D that is such a funny story, the guy has rather funny thoughts too :D Great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, sweet. I'm liking this! I really hope you continue. |
![]() ![]() Great romantic story! I think you did well to add a bit of innocence to both characters - it makes the story a bit more real. I hope you'll continue this story in the near future. It has great potential. Titan2 |
![]() ![]() I love the story so far. It's very well written and intriguing. I hope you update soon! |