Reviews for termite infested sea ballad
Lithium of Mercy chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
The title immediately caught my eye. The contents didn't fail me at all - It's brilliant. You have a great talent for emotional poetry, and, if I'm not overreaching, emotional analogies. Good work!
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
this is an almost

coulda shoulda.

if the dude's being

swept by a storm, why

cling to a buckling

mast? I'da said

'shorn from my roots'

to make the rhyme with

morn. ah...like

listening to procol

harum's 'a salty

dog': coulda been,

almost, shoulda

been...