That was sad. I really liked the style, the...rythm, for the loss of a better word.

It was sad. But...lovely and slightly creepy but I liked it. Um...Beautifully depressing.

This was really good. I especially liked the end as well as the voice you used.

HI, CREEPER SARA! :D

It was horrific in a way that's not horrific.

It's because people will do this one day.

We wish to expand what we can do, even if we're not meant to do so.

We want power.

So much power that is uncontainable & just...

Yeah.

:3

Now I have to go write...

This was really good. I kind of loved it. The summary drew me right in, and the whole story, right from the first line to the last line, kept me intrigued. Amazing job. :)

The ending was so sad, but lovely. This is a great piece. It's been a while since I've found anything on this site that I liked so much. Thank you.

~Eshana