Reviews for equinox
Isca chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
The "these days" lines are particularly powerful - my favourite being "the dusk falls so hard these days." The tone of these lines is so angsty it's almost palpable. Keep up the good work. :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
This is amazing.

"as the sky fades to autumn

and bleeds into the trees"

Wow.

"the rainbow rearranged itself

and she's been living in white

everyone's missing these days."

this is just lovely.

"she harmonizes sad songs from better days"

interesting that the sad songs are from better days. kind of contradicting but makes since.

The ending was perfect.

Great job. Keep writing :)
Laudanum chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Oh

I love the way you ordered the stanzas.