Haha! very good! she's so funny! :

Cute twist! I like! Your main lady character is pretty interesting...she's such a hyper person and a lil meanie to her sis...hahaha~

definitely a twist, ha ha. very very cute although she seems to be even younger than her 7 yr old sister ha ha

awwh, where was this in my inbox?

i need to give my inbox a stern talking to.

xD

but that was adorable. :]

oh gawsh, i wasn't expecting that ending!

Lol, this story is veery cute D

i never wouldve guessed he was her boyfriend

LOL i loved the twist!

well done _

loved it..

So cute. Never expected the guy to be her boyfriend of 2 years! :D

Uhm.

Oh gosh please please don't hate me but I didn't actually like it [

My reasons? I'm really sorry about this. But...

It had like very little description, the end was very confusing and overall seemed a bit rushedd [

Sowwi. It just wasn't very goodd...and I KNOW you can do better. That's why I'm saying it. Sorry.

Haha I love the ending - very interesting (and cute!) twist.

Absolutely adorable :)

Awesome story!

LOL.

that was cute(:

happy halloween!

:D

Haha o twist there. Why wouldn't she want her boyfriend to open the door though?

And why would a seven-year old need convincing to go trick-or-treating?

But anyways, yay Halloween! Hope you had a great one! ] I certainly did. Though we did watch the Grudge which was not cool 'cause I hate scary movies. But that's beside the point.

OH YAY! i loved it! very funny! ) cute cute cute! but no make-out scene! ( LOL kidding! great job girlie! ;D

Omg! I was in stitches reading your story. Wow. So hilarious. Everything flowed and the plot is amazing! Ten out of ten! And I say a no to the whole boyfriend thing.