vwahahhah :) *evil laugh*

okay im reviewing on chapter two cuz it lets me review like once in every chapter.

which is really stupid i think.

haha

and im hmm taiwanese. but im born in the states. haha.

LOL my friends always drag me shopping.

and makes me shop with them. its sucha waste of time.

haha :D

haha u stalk ur crush. aw. tell me all about him :D

-mich

New reader ! *waves* I love it! And yes, Jack and Sienna ! :) I was rooting for 'em so when I read that they will end up together, I was grinning like a mad woman. *laugh* I would have been so disappointed if she ended up with Marco... I don't like him, he sounds kind of... superficial. S

Hope to read more soon!

haha heyy!

oh jack (: thats still hot. hehe.

awwh so ur a girl's girl? :P

hahaha and i read ur post to elleveex3. LOL yes im a stalker :P

IM ASIAN TOO . (: hahaha. asian pride, mann.

haha i love jack. "babe" LOL.

update soon,

aryagal.

“Seriously, dude…stop it with the ‘babe’.”

Haha, I love your writing. It's soo entertaining! :] Your story has officially become one of the tabs on my Firefox window... I'll be constantly looking for updates so please don't stop!

Oh, and just one little typo:

“He basically told me he rejected me because I was a guy, and a second after, he asked me out,” I explained hastily. “But despite the fact that I feet

awesome! just knowing it would be jack and sienna just makes me want to read more! hope you update soon! any chance your posting character pics for this story? let me know :D

im already decided lol i want sienna with jack! but cant wait to read the next chapter! update soon!

I think Sienna's significant other will either be Marco or Jack. I'm kind of stuck in between the two.

Marco because- 1) First crushes never really go away (at least mine never has lol). I honestly think she still has a crush on him, but is too hurt from what happened, not to mention shocked that he is back, to really accept how she might still feel. 2) I think Marco felt the same way as her. I think he didn't want her to admit how she felt because he knew he wouldn't be around anymore once she said it and didn't want to put her through that hurt. So if she didn't say those words, the whole 'hurting' she had to go through when he ran off might have been avoided.

Jack because- I don't think all of his actions to her are pure friendship. All of his 'joking around' with her might be his way of saying his feelings outloud, but not actually admitting them. He is an ass to all other girls BUT her. And laying his hand on the small of her back while they walk out? Hm... Seems to me like he has an itty bitty crush on Sienna. And with Marco back in the picture, that could mean competetion for Sienna's affection...

I'm honestly torn between the two. Marco's the first crush, who might be hoping for a second chance. And then Jack is the supportive best friend, who would do anything for her...

GAHH! MUST READ NEXT CHAPTER NOW! LOL

Damn it woman it better be Jack!

XD

Marco reminds me of an innocent doe lmao. Poor kid!

And sienna can proudly call herself my idol! XD Or maybe I could proudly call her... Ah nevermind that!

Me love! You rock! I uh.. pebbles! XD

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

"Shut up," I said, shoving him lightly to the side. "You make me sound like a giant!"

Haha! I can totally relate to this! I'm 5'6-5'7 ASIAN, which totally contradicts against Anna. :D But, yeah. My friends call me giant's and Sasquatch and stuff. -_-' Reading that made me laugh so hard, cause it happens to me too! :D

Looks & sounds good so far. Can't wait for you to update! :))

... I hope it's Jack _ he seems awesome. I like it! P Hope you update soon (again ;P) I'll even bribe you with candy *waves candy* P

~Dark

HEY.

you have kickass writing skills.

and i totally ditched homework to read this. (:

hmm sienna should end up with marco.

because even though its a bit cliche, okay, very cliche, but because jack is her best friend and caleb is anna's. and the other two arn't that hot and interesting. so far (:

and i like the pairing. its cute.

haha anna's tiny. :D but i know how she feels.

im a short one too. hehe.

jack is like the typical hot player.

and marco is the typical new hottie.

haha man the girls are gonna kill sienna.

although i can kinda understand how she feels because most of my friends are guys too.

are you one of the boys? haha.

anyways, dont stop writing,

peace.

aryagal

hey! im visiting manila this december:D i think sienna and jack would be a better pair... im not sure how, i feel like they just mesh you know? well its all up to you so i dont really have a say in it :D

I probably go with Jack 'coz he acts so diff around her. At least that is what I hope! *cross fingers* I love seeing them together!

I love this story! Well-written and thanks for the incredinly quick updates.

I think the pairing will be Jack and Sienna just because they're so cute together and Jack so wants Sienna from that 'jealous' comment :P

As long as it's clear in later chapters that the other pairing (if I'm wrong) isn't as suitable as the final pairing, I'll like it.