|Reviews for Buying Cups|
| Solemn Coyote chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
The real punch of the poem lies in the repetition of "jealousy is unbecoming." Everything else seems to carry the reader along without shaking him up too much. There aren't any crazy trick verses or multiple meanings that I was able to pick up on, but you capture the emotion of male jealousy quite succinctly.
Also, you've got a great ending. It slams the poem closed, and it gives the reader something to think over. I'm still working on getting my fiction to end like that.