|Reviews for Hey there Delilah|
| QuirkyxKayla chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
This is interesting, Natalie. I can't wait to see where it goes.
| noctema chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
i enjoy the fragmented pieces of it. however, you should be careful not to have the character be so similar to you. also, i wouldn't use the "..." in dialogue. it takes up space and distracts and looks bad. i would have put that she just remained silent.
i'm glad you're writing again.
i'll help you, if need be.