I like the story, even though it's a little confusing. I don't mind it, however...

By the way, loved "Billy's Friends.'

Anyway, the story flow is good, but still, it's confusing, as I said. I don't mind it...it's a bit annoying, yeah, but y'know how it is. Sorry...I know this is a sucky review, but I'm short on time. Good story, hope to see more soon!