|Reviews for Five in a Box|
| Indicates chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This story is off to an interesting premise. I can't say it's "too" original so far - feels a bit like your standard sci-fi story, but the writing's not bad and the main character Marsh IS an interesting heroine. I hope there won't be too many predictable obstacles for her to face. I'll be watching out for this story.
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I love this opening. You've really described everything well, given insight into the two leads (Luke is a lead, right?). Marsh seems a real interesting character, and I can't wait to see what her relationship with Luke is going to be. Also can't wait until the advertised aliens show up.
Promising start. Can't wait for more!