Reviews for i leave the last two syllables to you
n.p-simmons chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I like the humour in this short haiku. It's very effective in getting your mood across to the reader. Nice job.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Haha, a clever manipulation of the form. I completely see where you're coming from..
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Oh this is great ahaha very original haiku (ehm.. kinda haiku lol). Keep writing please!

Anna _
lymli chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I like the irony in this and how the character feels sick of everything.