Reviews for The Mating
tropicaljuice chapter 45 . 5/6/2012
i feel bad coming here to..well to not compliment you..if that makes any sense! but just thought i'd say: here's some constructive criticism

stop telling us whats going to happen in the story in your author notes, it kinda ruins it.. :S sorry
Rosedreamer101 chapter 42 . 4/22/2012
:D i was very skeptical to read this story at first...but gosh- i'm glad i did :D this was a wonderful read :)
BookAddiction24 chapter 45 . 3/31/2012
There's a sequel AND a prequel? awesome :)
BookAddiction24 chapter 42 . 3/31/2012
They are the cutest couple in existence!
BookAddiction24 chapter 41 . 3/31/2012
Ryne! I'll be your Elise!
BookAddiction24 chapter 40 . 3/31/2012
This story is so amazing! I love it!
BookAddiction24 chapter 39 . 3/31/2012
I think that Kane has come to save her... and I love Ryne (:
BookAddiction24 chapter 38 . 3/31/2012
Ryne! He's gonna save her! :D ...I hope...
BookAddiction24 chapter 37 . 3/31/2012
Can I rip Marla's head off?

I actually started crying while I was reading this chapter! good job(:
BookAddiction24 chapter 36 . 3/31/2012
Marla is such a *badword*!

And Kane should just trust her! If he "loves" her so much, then why won't he just listen to what she has to say?
BookAddiction24 chapter 35 . 3/31/2012
I think that he regrets it because he thinks that she didn't want it, so she feels his regret and becomes sad, so he thinks that she's sad that they did it, so he regrets it more!
BookAddiction24 chapter 33 . 3/31/2012
I think that he'll maybe possibly somehow forgive her/understand... sorta
BookAddiction24 chapter 32 . 3/29/2012
Marla, I'm not falling for your innocent act one bit!
BookAddiction24 chapter 31 . 3/29/2012
Wow! Rose should have just ashed Elise about it!

And I thought that Elise should have just told Kane.
BookAddiction24 chapter 30 . 3/29/2012
I just don't trust Marla at all! Did she take the evidence and tell the company?
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