Reviews for The Mating
akaCHEEKS chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
this is really interesting. i'm going to read the rest tomorrow!
Jinxed Rogue chapter 28 . 12/14/2009
GAH! I can't believe Elise is falling for Marla's sabotage!
sneaky-fox chapter 31 . 12/14/2009
oh no I ran out of chapters... gimme more! I love your story! you make all the characters so lovable (except Marla!) I want a Kane of my own ;)
in-white-houses chapter 27 . 12/14/2009
this is a very good story. i love it when i am able to find a good werewolf story there never seems to be enough mating one :P keep up the amazing story!
Eccthlacine chapter 31 . 12/14/2009
Ooh cliffy. Can't wait to see what happens next. Well written, though sometimes certain parts don't flow well. Like to characters and Marla is satisfyingly irritating, but they all seem awful dense sometimes; it's frustrating, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lierixel chapter 31 . 12/14/2009
Y-You evil, evil person! D': Why! I demand to see the next chapter, how is this going to turn out! Marla is pure evil 8(

Give the next chapter NOW 8( I will cry if you don't. I hope Elise gets her side of the story out before /someone/ else does...

Don't rewrite until you you finish! D'8 You know, I'm waiting for that (forgive me if I get the term incorrect) blood bond part D; When are you going to give it?

UPDATE SOON and keep up the /awesome/ work! 8D
charm en route chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
Oh, whatever, she should just tell him. I bet he'd be less mad if she just explained that he came into town and then talked about everything they said. But that would be too easy, huh?

Hahah. [:
Destiny1406 chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
please tell me that Marla isnt' the girlfriend... that would help her get the oil that spilled on the property... grr. . i really odn't like her...

Haybell :)

PS update soon please :)
lionandthelamblove7 chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
Oh my gosh! I'm going to go crazy! I have to know what is going to happen next! Love the drama and can not wait for more!

-lionandthelamblove7
anonymous8D chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
Wow. They didn't even give Elise a chance to explain oreven tellher what the problem was!
annajade chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
And the plot thickens!

You're previous chapter was good, so don't worry about it. It was adorable. On this one, it brings out anticipation. Mmhmm.

-Anna
Hawaiianlover chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
Aha, I knew Marla was up to something. (x

I wish Elise would have told Kane in the beginning about Bryan. Wouldn't he have understood? They are mates, therfore he should respect the fact that Elise has 'guy'- friends. If he doesn't, then he is a messed up MATE! As far as I am concerned, Phoebe & Zoe aren't good enough fiends. They don't let Elise explain on the situation, first of all and believe Rose. Even though Rose is probably their good friend, they should have heard Elise's side.

& oh! I am wondering if Marla is Marty's Girl friend & if Rayne -sp?- is still with Marla ... hm...

Well you have a fan that loves your STORY! Keep Going - please?
to fall or to jump chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
OMG! I really hate Marla now! That was mean but her friends should at least try to hear her side of things...

I hope she can explain it to Kane without him getting hurt!

Awesome chapter again! even if you keep being mean with all these cliffhangers! P
cytl101 chapter 31 . 12/13/2009
at least she's figured out that Marla's idea was stupid ...

that's an improvement...

great job :)
u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME chapter 29 . 12/13/2009
ohmigosh! ignore the ps in my other review! i accidently put it in the wrong story! ugh i feel like an idiot! sorry again! just dont read it lol
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