I liked this, though i think i have Marla figured out.

THis whole time Marla has been working with Ryne. he has her in ihs hands. she stole the report to possibly change it and ruin it or something. also she was there when Thomas got shot becasue of the perfume. also she used the part where Ryne showed up at her house to earn sympathy and throw off suspicion. am i getting close? i'm sure i have it figure it out, but i'll wait to see what you have to say... lol

Haybell :)

those are usually not good words...

I still think Marla needs to "die in a hole"- Madagascar 2

:)

great job

OMG! you are horrible!

First Elise is lying to Kane all the time! WHich totally sucks! and she's stupidly taking Marla's advice!

And I dont know but I think Marla is evil and betraying the pack. I think she wore the perfume and thats why Thomas smelled it when he was shot because Ryne was with Marla before he shot Thomas (if that makes sense). And MArla wanted Kane to get the picture for her so he would see Elise and Bryan together.

And Rose was sent so she saw Bryan and Elise and is mad at Elise because she thinks she's betraying Kane...

I dont know sorry I just had to say that. Really awesome chapter even though the end was MEAN!

that's so intriguing:) looking forward to a new chapter

Oh snap! Does that mean that a little *someone* was there when Ryne shot Thomas? Oh, so much to think about and having to wait, darn. hehe. I wonder what Kane is going to tell Elise...Hm...Loved this chapter and can not wait until you update! Love it!

-lionandthelamblove7

OK first Marla is definitely up to something. I don't trust at ALL.

Omg! So im going to take a wild leap here and say that I think that maybe Ryne and Bryan are working together, idk. Ugh I can't wait for Kane to finally find out about Bryan and all that so that Elise can stop lying to him and stuff. I mean they're only friends, its not like there's anything between them and the more she keeps lying the worse it looks.

Hmm...I wonder what Kane has to tell her...? \

Great chapter! Darn those cliffhangers lol. The next chapter sounds like it will be very interesting. :)

O what does he want to tell her? mean place to leave it! :(

This may be crazy and probably isnt true but i think that the package rose picked up was some kind of evidence of Elise and Bryans meeting (making out that they are having an affair), planted by Marla for Kane to see, because she seemed awfully dissappointed the other day when Elise say nothing had gone wrong. Well, that would explain why rose was angry anyway :D Or she could be a dark horse that has some secret vendetta against Elise and it was her in the car earlier. But i still think that mabye it was marla in the car because i think she is playing both Ryne and Kane..

What? What What? I love this story!

Marla is DEFINATLEY working for Ryne. The missing report and the perfume that Thomas scented along with Ryne that night just points to her. And that must be how Ryne knew Elise was there the second day after her arrival, Marla must have informed him.

Now she's trying to put everyone in the pack against her, first Rose, now Thomas. I wouldn't be surprised if she stuck the report in Elise's diary and made it look like she took it. :(

Elise needs to tell Kane everything now before things get to complicated and out of control.

-Liz :D

why why why does she keep listening to marla doesnt she realize the girl hasnt chnaged at all? she shouldve just yold kane the truth it wouldve gone over better than it will if he finds out she lied which she really didnt do but yea

I bet Marla was with Ryne when Thomas got injured...then again i could be wrong

poor clueless Elise :(

UH OH! I want to know what it is!

GAH! I really hate Marla, she is causing problems! & Elise needs to realize whats going on and tell Kane!

i have a strong feeling i know where this is all going ;)

sorry I havn't reveiwed in a long time, been busy with work unfortunately. Anyway can't wait to see what Kane has to tell her...I bet Bryan is probably trying to join in with Ryne but the question is, Is he involved with it? And the perfume can't hide the scent of anything perfectly can it? Why didn't it set alarms off in Elises mind when Marla told her that it masks scents? Anyway I gotta go. Need to leave early for work, It's SNOWING! hehehe